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poet | playwright | novelistThu, 07 Nov 2013 14:44:51 +0100hourly1http://wordpress.org/?v=3.4.1By: Sara
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SaraMon, 08 Jul 2013 11:10:54 +0000http://kathrynhogan.ca/writersblog/?page_id=248#comment-47492New favorite paragraph in Wild Land!!!
"What are you thinking, Liz?"
"Nice things . . . like that you're cute." She smiled at the happiness that radiated from him in response. "And sweet." He smiled broadly and she giggled. She bit her lip to look provocative. And sexy. And. . . . I don't actually know very much about you. I mean, we've been friends, but there's still a lot to learn.
Dinky's eyebrows shot up and he started to blush.
"Well," he stammered, "if you want, we could find a quiet place and . . . learn more about each other." His hand had found its way from her face down her throat. He traced slowly down the line of buttons on her shirt. Elizabeth moaned, suddenly overwhelmed by the heat between her legs.
***1 hour***
That is such an exciting part, Kathryn, and I especially liked how you put the ***1 hour*** . . . I can only imagine what happened next, and there's no way it wasn't extremely hot!New favorite paragraph in Wild Land!!!
“What are you thinking, Liz?”
“Nice things . . . like that you’re cute.” She smiled at the happiness that radiated from him in response. “And sweet.” He smiled broadly and she giggled. She bit her lip to look provocative. And sexy. And. . . . I don’t actually know very much about you. I mean, we’ve been friends, but there’s still a lot to learn.
Dinky’s eyebrows shot up and he started to blush.
“Well,” he stammered, “if you want, we could find a quiet place and . . . learn more about each other.” His hand had found its way from her face down her throat. He traced slowly down the line of buttons on her shirt. Elizabeth moaned, suddenly overwhelmed by the heat between her legs.
***1 hour***
That is such an exciting part, Kathryn, and I especially liked how you put the ***1 hour*** . . . I can only imagine what happened next, and there’s no way it wasn’t extremely hot!
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http://kathrynhogan.ca/writersblog/kathryns-books/wild-land/#comment-39475
SaraThu, 09 May 2013 17:38:38 +0000http://kathrynhogan.ca/writersblog/?page_id=248#comment-39475sounds like a terrific read, Kathryn! Plausible magic and two thousand year old love stories, plus robots and your sense of humor - no one will be able to put it down!sounds like a terrific read, Kathryn! Plausible magic and two thousand year old love stories, plus robots and your sense of humor – no one will be able to put it down!
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